Posts tagged writing
Posts tagged writing
Discussion about dialogue with fellow writer Mary Cain
I had planned on releasing a new science fantasy novel this last week. It’s one I’ve been working on for some time, based largely on the universe I created for a role-playing game I’ve been playing since I was 12, Epilogue. Epilogue, as I played it, was a mixture of science fiction (it was set on an Alderson Disk a million years in the future) and fantasy (there was magic). The magic may have had a pseudo-scientific explanation, but it was still magic, and therefore not usually mixed with far-future adventures in space.
So, this novel is about a woman performing a mythical feat to speak to the gods for her dying people, and there are parts of it I really like - a really well-turned phrase or two, several of the characters - but the whole is just not working for me. As I work through this edit, there is less and less that interests me and makes me think of this as a story I want to tell. It’s discouraging.
I’m thinking about a more extensive rewrite than I was initially going to give it, so I’m moving it out of its place in my publishing order. That means that my next book up is going to be The Lascaux Nightmare (title may change), which will be coming out at the beginning of May. Summer should see the mainstream novel Chrysalis, about an evangelical Christian woman facing doubts about her faith and curiosity about atheism, and then the fall will be spent concentrating on getting out book 2 of the Chelsea Perkins Trilogy, The Ring Of Stones. At the end of the year, I’ll either release this book, tentatively titled Wall, or else I will release either a magical police procedural (The Res) or my neo-Nazi time-travel thriller (Protocols of the Elders of Zion).
There may be a few extra projects sprinkled here and there - I have an idea for an audiobook or two that I will be releasing on Podiobooks as I write them, and even though my Kickstarter didn’t fund, I’ll try to release the Today In Alternate History collection this year.
I’ll be busy. It would be nice if my books started selling well enough to where I could just write full-time - then I could get these out the door and maybe some more besides. (Hint, hint). I’ll have a new job probably this time next week, and I hope it doesn’t interfere with my schedule; we’ll see. In the meantime, hope y’all will take a look at what I’ve got going on, and tell your friends!
After my long rant, I figured I’d give you guys direct links, because searching is useless until I come up with a nom de plume… Zygote Z. Zzygomorph? Aaaanton A. Aaalcatraz? I’ll think about it.
THE TREE OF KNOWLEDGE (Book 1 of the Chelsea Perkins Trilogy): When your father shows up 12 years after abandoning you as a baby and tells you that he has something important for you to do, the last thing you expect to have to do is kill him. If you’re Chelsea Perkins, your day is only going to get stranger from there…
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WARP: When the alien Mlosh landed on earth in the 18th century, the human world warped around their presence. Now, some humans want them gone - and they are using the Mlosh’s own tools against them.
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HOPE: What if you could have fame, fortune or love - but each was mutually exclusive? Johnny Crane is a young Texan living in New York City in the 1990’s, trying to break into the worlds of publishing and acting and trying to navigate the world of love without breaking his heart. But his walls are papered with rejection, and his loneliness is only eased by his best friend, a fellow Texan in the big city. He floats at the edge of success, but finds himself unable to land. When he is tempted with the culmination of each of his dreams, he sees no way to combine them. Can he hope to find a way, or must he choose?
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BEFORE/AFTER: A lottery winner, a divorcee and a conspiracy theorist awaken after the unexpected victory of John Kerry in the 2004 election to a world that has changed drastically. Together, they will fight to do what is right.
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3rd M: The talk show of the 3rd Millennium! Meet aliens, matter transportation accidents, over-assertive clones and more in this sitcom pilot screenplay
a massively extended version of ruthlesscalculus’ post
General Tips
- Joss Whedon’s Top 10 Writing Tips
- Getting Out of Your Comfort Zone
- 34 Writing Tips that will make you a Better Writer
- 50 Free resources that will improve your writing skills
- 5 ways to get out of the comfort zone and become a stronger writer
- 10 ways to avoid Writing Insecurity
- The Writer’s Guide to Overcoming Insecurity
- The Difference Between Good Writers and Bad Writers
- You’re Not Hemingway - Developing Your Own Style
- 7 Ways to use Brain Science to Hook Readers and Reel them In
- 8 Short Story Tips from Kurt Vonnegut
- How to Show, Not Tell
- 5 Essential Story Ingredients
- How to Write Fiction that grabs your readers from page one
- Why research is important in writing
- Make Your Reader Root for Your Main Character
- Writing Ergonomics (Staying Comfortable Whilst Writing)
- The Importance of Body Language
Character Development
- 10 days of Character Building
- Name Generators
- Name Playground
- Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
- Seven Common Character Types
- Handling a Cast of Thousands Part 1 - Getting To Know Your Characters
- Web Resources for Developing Characters
- Building Fictional Characters
- Fiction Writer’s Character Chart
- Character Building Workshop
- Tips for Characterization
- Character Chart for Fiction Writers
- Villains are people too but…
- How to Write a Character Bible
- Character Development Exercises
- All Your Characters Talk the Same - And They’re Not A Hivemind!
- Medieval Names Archive
- Sympathy Without Saintliness
- Family Echo (Family Tree Maker)
- Behind The Name
- 100 Character Development Questions for Writers
- Aether’s Character Development Worksheet
- The 12 Common Archetypes
- Six Types of Courageous Characters
- Kazza’s List of Character Secrets - Part 1, Part 2
- Creating Believable Characters With Personality
- Body Language Cheat Sheet
- Creating Fictional Characters Series
- Three Ways to Avoid Lazy Character Description
- 7 Rules for Picking Names for Fictional Characters
- Character Development Questionnaire
- How to Create Fictional Characters
- Character Name Resources
- Character Development Template
- Character Development Through Hobbies
- Character Flaws List
- 10 Questions for Creating Believable Characters
- Ari’s Archetype Series
- How to Craft Compelling Characters
- List of 200 Character Traits
- Writing Characters of the Opposite Sex
- Making Your Characters Likable
- Do you really know your characters?
- Character Development: Virtues
- Character Development: Vices
- Character Morality Alignment
- List of Negative Personality Traits
- List of Positive Personality Traits
- List of Emotions - Positive
- List of Emotions - Negative
- Loon’s Character Development Series - Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4
- Phobia List A-L (Part 1), M-Z (Part 2)
- 30 Day In Depth Character Development Meme
- Words for Emotions based on Severity
- Eight Bad Characters
- High Level Description of the Sixteen Personality Types
Female Characters
- How Not to Write Female Characters
- Writing Female Characters
- How to write empowering female characters
- Why I write strong female characters
- Red Flags for Female Characters Written by Men
- Writing strong female characters
- The Female Character Flowchart
- Eight Heroine Archetypes
Male Characters
Tips for Specific Characters
- Writing A Vampire
- Writing Pansexual Characters
- Writing Characters on the Police Force
- Writing Drunk Characters
- Writing A Manipulative Character
- Writing A Friends With Benefits Relationship
- Writing A Natural Born Leader
- Writing A Flirtatious Character
- Writing A Nice Character
- Fiction Writing Exercises for Creating Villains
- Five Traits to Contribute to an Epic Villain
- Writing Villains that Rock
- Writing British Characters
- How To Write A Character With A Baby
- On Assassin Characters
Dialogue
- It’s Not What They Say…
- Top 8 Tips for Writing Dialogue
- Speaking of Dialogue
- The Great Said Debate
- He Said, She Said, Who Said What?
- How to Write Dialogue Unique to Your Characters
- Writing Dialogue: Go for Realistic, Not Real-Life
Point of View
Plot, Conflict, Structure and Outline
- Writing A Novel Using the Snowflake Method
- Effectively Outlining Your Novel
- Conflict and Character Within Story Structure
- Outlining Your Plot
- Ideas, Plots and Using the Premise Sheets
- How To Write A Novel
- Creating Conflict and Sustaining Suspense
- Plunge Right In…Into Your Story, That Is
- Tips for Creating a Compelling Plot
- 36 (plus one) Dramatic Situations
- The Evil Overlord Devises A Plot: Excerpt from Stupid Plot Tricks
- Conflict Test
- What is Conflict?
- Monomyth
- The Hero’s Journey: Summary of Steps
- Outline Your Novel in Thirty Minutes
- Plotting Without Fears
- Novel Outlining 101
- Writing The Perfect Scene
- One-Page Plotting
- The Great Swampy Middle
- How Can You Know What Belongs In Your Book?
- Create A Plot Outline in 8 Easy Steps
- How to Organize and Develop Ideas for Your Novel
- Create Structure in your novel using index cards
- Choosing the best outline method for you
- Hatch’s Plot Bank
Setting & Worldbuilding
- Magical Word Builder’s Guide
- I Love The End Of The World
- World Building 101
- The Art of Description: Eight Tips to Help Bring Your Settings to Life
- Creating the Perfect Setting - Part 1
- Creating a Believable World
- Setting
- Character and Setting Interactions
- Maps Workshop - Developing the Fictional World Through Mapping
- World Builders Project
- How To Create Fantasy Worlds
- Creating Fantasy and Science Fiction Worlds
Creativity Boosters* denotes prompts
- *Creative Writing Prompts
- *Ink Provoking
- *Story Starter
- *Story Spinner
- *Story Kitchen
- *Language is a Virus
- *The Dabbling Mum
- Quick Story Idea Generator
- Solve Your Problems By Simply Saying Them Out Loud
- Busting Your Writing Rut
- Creative Acceleration: 11 Tips To Engineer A Productive Flow
- Writing Inspiration, Or Sex on a Bicycle
- The Seven Major Beginner Mistakes
- Complete Your First Book with these 9 Simple Writing Habits
- Free Association, Active Imagination, Twilight Imaging
- Random Book Title Generator
- Finishing Your Novel
- Story Starters & Idea Generators
- Words to Use More Often
Revision & Grammar
- How To Rewrite
- Editing Recipe
- Cliche Finder
- Revising Your Novel: Read What You’ve Written
- Writing 101: Revising A Novel
- 20 Common Grammar Mistakes That (Almost) Everyone Makes
- Synonyms for the Most Commonly Used Words of the English Language
- Grammar Urban Legends
Tools & Software
- Tip Of My Tongue - Find the word you’re looking for
- Write or Die - Stay motivated
- Stay Focused - Tool for Chrome, lock yourself out of distracting websites
- My Writing Nook - Online Text Editor, Free
- Bubbl.us - Online Mind Map Application, Free
- Family Echo - Online Family Tree Maker, Free
- Freemind - Mind Map Application; Free; Windows, Mac, Linux, Portable
- Xmind - Mind Map Application; Free; Windows, Mac, Linux, Portable
- Liquid Story Binder - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $45.95; Windows, Portable
- Scrivener - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $39.95; Mac
- SuperNotecard - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free trial, $29; Windows, Mac, Linux, portable
- yWriter - Novel Organization and Writing Application; free; Windows, Linux, portable
- JDarkRoom - Minimalist Text Editing Application; free; Windows, Mac, Linux, portable
- AutoRealm - Map Creation Application; free; Windows, Linux with Wine
Specific Help
Reblogging for myself
Reblogging for myself. I’m also going to save the ones that really interest me off-line, because things happen.
Thanks for sharing this!
(via dduane)
Once upon a time, a comic strip by Alison Bechdel popularized a rule by her friend Liz Wallace, that she only saw a movie if it 1) had two named/significant female characters who 2) talked to each other about 3) something other than a man.
It doesn’t seem like too hard a hurdle to jump, right? Weeeeeelllll…
According to bechdeltest.com, which was set up specifically to find out the answer to that question, a majority - 53% - of movies do pass, although many times it is because the women are talking about marriage or babies. Still, a pass is a pass, and even if it is a slim majority, most films let their female characters have some kind of life outside of their men.
Light Bulb Jokes for Writers
Q: How many copy editors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: I can’t tell whether you mean ‘change a light bulb’ or ‘have sex in a light bulb.’ Can we reword it to remove the ambiguity?Q: How many editors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Only one. But first they have to rewire the entire building.Q: How many managing editors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: You were supposed to have changed that light bulb last week!Q: How many art directors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Does it HAVE to be a light bulb?Q: How many copy editors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: The last time this question was asked, it involved art directors. Is the difference intentional? Should one or the other instance be changed? It seems inconsistent.Q: How many marketing directors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: It isn’t too late to make this neon instead, is it?Q: How many proofreaders does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Proofreaders aren’t supposed to change light bulbs. They should just query them.Q: How many writers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: But why do we have to CHANGE it?Q: How many publishers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Three. One to screw it in, and two to hold down the author.Q: How many booksellers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Only one, and they’ll be glad to do it too, except no one shipped them any.Q: How many editors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: You’ve already screwed in too many light bulbs. Repetition!Q: How many writers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: One, and they like to give it a good twist at the end.Q: How many writers does it take to change a light bulb?
A: Just one, but the light bulb has to endure a series of conflicts and challenges before it finally changes.Q: How many reviewers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: None. They just stand back and critique while you do it.Q: How many netgilantes does it take to screw in a lightbulb?
A: Did he use an English word? Must be a writer! Let’s lynch him!!!!Q: How many reviewers does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: Only one, but first they have to tell you why they didn’t like how you did it.Q: How many Kindleboards authors does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: One, followed by a 12-page, passionately-argued thread about how much the light bulb should cost.Q: How many forum users does it take to screw in a light bulb?
A: One, but in the following ten-page discussion, someone will invoke a comparison to Nazis.Q: How many authors does it take to change a light bulb?
A: Only one but you also need an editor, proof reader, cover artist, and an agent to be there at the same time.Originally reblogged from Tyson Adams
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10 Ways To Get Out Of Your Writer’s Rut
There is no such thing as writer’s block.
I don’t believe in Writer’s Block. I believe writers simply get stuck when they’re writing. There are many reasons why this happens. At Writers Write, we always encourage writers to plot their book before they start writing. You need to know where you’re going before you begin.
I have also interviewed more than 100 authors. Most of these writers have a plan, they have a writing routing, they are open to learning, and they know how their book is going to end. They don’t believe in waiting for the muse. They believe in hard work.
These are the most common reasons why writers stop writing.
10 things writers struggle with when writing a book
- They avoid writing uncomfortable or difficult scenes.
- They can’t get beyond the synopsis.
- They can’t seem to finish anything.
- They don’t know how to start the book, the next scene, the next chapter.
- They enrol for new courses but they take the same old ideas with them.
- They haven’t written a synopsis.
- They keep on repeating what they’ve already written.
- They talk about writing but never start.
- They write their characters into corners.
- They write, edit, rewrite, and edit the same scene instead of moving on.
Once we identify these problems, I am able to help my students.
Here are 10 simple ways to solve these problems
- Change the sex of your protagonist or antagonist.
- Change viewpoints if you’re stuck. Write it from another character’s perspective. Try writing in a different viewpoint. Write in first person if you always write in third person.
- Commit to the writing life. Writers write.
- Enrol in a writing class. Leave your old, tired ideas at home.
- Make to do lists for your character. Or send your character shopping for a character he hates.
- Play the what if? game for your character. Rewind and get the story back to a point where your character can move on with the action.
- Promise yourself a meaningful reward when you finish.
- Stop editing. Carry on writing. You can fix the draft later. You’re looking at a minimum of eight rewrites anyway - plenty of time for editing.
- Use a timer for the scenes you find difficult to write. Just do it.
- Write a synopsis. Set up a daily writing routine. Set aside a minimum amount of time or commit to writing a number of words.
From Writers Write
Like the illustrious Simon Haynes, creator of the Hal Spacejock series and the awesome yWriter program, Mark Fassett is an author who has created his own program for writing novels. Both his fiction and his programming seem very cool - check him out!
This is an entirely one-sided article that treads heavily in alarmism and doesn’t even entertain the possibility that there could be another side to the story. Can’t wait to see if J.A. Konrath decides to eviscerate it.
@WritersRT This is someone who’s recruited us all to make sure that writing is done and deadlines are met - http://daringnovelist.blogspot.com/